Test Screening Feedback Report - KORRUPTED

Working Title Of The Production - 'Korrupted'

Media Language- B B B B A C A B B A
Conventions- A A B A A B A A A B
Creativity- B B B A A C A A A B
Attention To Detail- B C B A B B B B C A
Tecnical Proficiency- B B C B B C B B B C

WWW...
Cinematography- Good Variaton Of Shots. The Hand Held POV Shot. Good Shot Of Drugs Scene. Good Camra Frameing.

Mise En Scene- Cocain Shot. Very Good Locations Used. Costumes Are Good. Deatil In Scene Is Good. Mixed Locations.

Lighting- Good In Setting- Low Key Lighting Conotes Genra Well.

Sound- / / / / /

Conventions- Drug Use and Alcahole also Appeled To Our Target Audeience Since They Were Shown In It. 'Perfect'.

EBI...
Cinematography- Shot's From The Hills Are Bad (need to be stedy). Shoot From Different Angles.

Mise En Scene- Living Room Needs To Be Concidered. Some Scenes Seem Empty, Concider Props. Show Facial Expressions.

Lighting- More Day Time Footage. Some High Key Lighting.

Sound- No Sound. NEED SOUND.

Conventions- No Girls So Doesnt Apply To Everyone. Use a 'Gangsta Walk'. Use More Props.

What Else Would Our Audence Like To See?
More Attertude, Facial Expressions. Female Characters, More Actors. More Of The Narrative.

Suggestions They Made...
Use Footsteps on Digetic Sound While Showing The Characters Running. Use a Fast Beat Soundtrack. Play Around With Slow-Motion. Fast Cuts To Add Pace.