Feedback On Our Pitch - Saira .x

The Feedback We Had Received From Our Pitch Was To Change The Title 'Hustle'. This Is Because; The Word Hustle Links More To Money And Gambling. However, Our Trailer Will Not Be About This. Therefore, We Are Going To Change The Name Of The Trailer Into Something More Appealing, Which Will Also Go With The Theme Of Our Production. Moreover, We Were Told To Think Of More Ideas As Our Ideas Were Very Similar To That Of 'Kidulthood', As The Only Difference Was, Our Trailer Was Going To Feature Asians. Therefore, We Have Taken This Into Consideration And Have Come Up With Some "EBI's" And "NBS's".

Even Better If . .

1) Change The Title Of Our Production
2) Come Up With Some Unique Ideas Which Has Not Been Shown In Other Films
3) Include Both Male's And Female's As It Will Then Appeal To Both Gender's
4) Change The Setting As It Is Similar To Other Productions
5) Think About The Casting, And Who We Are Going To Film

Next Best Steps . .

1) To Come Up With A New Title
2) To Come Up With A Different Storyline So It Isn't The Same As Other Films
3) To Think About The Character's We Are Going To Use In Our Production
4) To Think About The Setting And Where We Are Going To Film
5) To Think About The Different Shots We Are Going To Use In Order To Attract The Audience