Feed Back On Our Pitch -Harvy xX

Hustle received very positive feedback although, their were some improvements that could have been made such as the title of our production. The name ‘Hustle’ may not be appropriate since it connotes different meanings to what we had intended our audience to believe. Also we were criticised for not carrying out enough background information since our ideas were very similar to films already produced. However we can surely overcome this problem by carrying out further background research and this will be done in the process as we develop our practical production.

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Feedback On Our Pitch - Saira .x

The Feedback We Had Received From Our Pitch Was To Change The Title 'Hustle'. This Is Because; The Word Hustle Links More To Money And Gambling. However, Our Trailer Will Not Be About This. Therefore, We Are Going To Change The Name Of The Trailer Into Something More Appealing, Which Will Also Go With The Theme Of Our Production. Moreover, We Were Told To Think Of More Ideas As Our Ideas Were Very Similar To That Of 'Kidulthood', As The Only Difference Was, Our Trailer Was Going To Feature Asians. Therefore, We Have Taken This Into Consideration And Have Come Up With Some "EBI's" And "NBS's".

Even Better If . .

1) Change The Title Of Our Production
2) Come Up With Some Unique Ideas Which Has Not Been Shown In Other Films
3) Include Both Male's And Female's As It Will Then Appeal To Both Gender's
4) Change The Setting As It Is Similar To Other Productions
5) Think About The Casting, And Who We Are Going To Film

Next Best Steps . .

1) To Come Up With A New Title
2) To Come Up With A Different Storyline So It Isn't The Same As Other Films
3) To Think About The Character's We Are Going To Use In Our Production
4) To Think About The Setting And Where We Are Going To Film
5) To Think About The Different Shots We Are Going To Use In Order To Attract The Audience

.. An Outline Of Our Project .. - Saira x

For Our Project, We Are Going To Create A Trailer Called "Hustle". We Are Going To Produce A Trailer Revolving Around A Man And The Troubles That Follow Him. By Trouble We Mean Drugs, Alcohol, Fights And Girls. This Will Attract The Target Audience As The Trailer Itself Features Young Teenagers. Therefore, The Audience Is Able To Apply The Film To Themselves As The Idea’s That Will Be Featured In The Trailer Tend To Happen A Lot With Everyday Lives.

We Came Up With This Idea By Looking At The Trailer For ‘Friday’. This Is Because; Friday Is A Similar Story However The Only Difference Is That It Features A Lot Of Comedy. Our Trailer Will Not Have Comedy In It As We Will Be Applying To A Serious Issue, Trying To Get The Message Across. Also, The Film Adulthood Gave Us The Idea As The Film Also Features Life About Sex, Drugs And Crime. Therefore, By Applying A Similar Storyline To Our Trailer, We Are Able To Attract Our Target Audience Since Adulthood Was A Hit As A Large Variety Of People, Mainly Teenagers Went To Watch The Movie.

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